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Tuesday, 22 November 2016

The Discover of The Delicious Treats


The Discovery of The Delicious Treats

Chapter 1: Pizzaland
In the future where pizza could talk there is a place called Pizza land and they are very edible so they stay hidden from the outside world.

There is a very popular restaurant called the Pizza Palace, the boss of the restaurant is called Captain Cheesy. After working his crust off Captain Cheesy locked the restaurant. He walked to his car with exhaustion
He entered his house and climbed onto his bed and drifted off to sleep. The very next morning the sun was shining bright through Captain Cheesy’s window and birds were chirping. Cheesy woke up yawning “time to go to work” said Cheesy smiling.

After getting ready he took his bike and rode to work. When he arrived at his restaurant he felt broken hearted because he couldn't believe what he saw. The restaurant was destroyed.
“Why???” Cheesy wailed rushing inside.

“I must call the police,” Cheesy said. After a long conversation with the police they arrived to solve the problem.
“Wow Captain Cheesy I really love the food you make so I am going to help you with all my effort and also my name is Crusty Corner,” Corner said.

Crusty Corner is a pizza with black sunglasses,a police suit and at the top of his head there is a massive crust which was the reason why his name was Crusty Corner.  “Thank you and if we find  the thief you will get to have a free meal,” Cheesy replied.
“Well I better start working,” Crusty said happily.


Chapter 2: The Mysterious Mystery
“I’m sorry Mr Cheesy but we can’t find any evidence because your security cameras were broken and there are no fingerprints or clues…” Crusty said
“Oh well thank you for helping…..” Cheesy said looking furious.

“But...I have a friend and he is really good at discovering new things and his name is Detective Dough, I shall call him,” Crusty said
“Really??” Cheesy asked curiously
“Yes I may call him now excuse me for a sec,” Crusty said.

“Ok I finished calling him and he said he is able to come tomorrow,” Crusty said
“Thank you so much!!” Cheesy said turning his frown upside down.
“Ok well we should get outta of here?” Crusty said
“We meet tomorrow over here?” Cheesy asked
“Sure early because Detective Dough hates people being late,” Crusty said waving his hand.

The next day was very exciting for Captain Cheesy because he was really looking forward to solving some mysterious and catching the criminal that had caused so much trouble and of course he didn't want to be late. He was so happy that he got ready fast like the Flash. He didn't want to waste his time getting on the bike instead he ran.

When he got there Detective Dough and Crusty Corner were already there. Detective Dough had a long,pitch black moustache, a black suit and a long hat that looked like Mad hatter’s hat.  



“You’re late” Detective Dough said in a french accent.
“Ok...should we start searching?” Cheesy asked
“I already did,” Dough said.

“Ok..ok my bad,” Cheesy said
“ Dough has found 2 objects, one is a piece of paper and the other is a chunk of bun and I suggest you should do the thinking since we did the work,” Crusty said
“Ai” Dough said agreeing
“Ok..well...thanks for helping so how about this mess?” Cheesy asked
“ The builders are doing that,” Dough said
“I’ll call them then,” Cheesy said
“ I already did…..I guess you’re late...again,” Dough said.

Chapter 3: The target
He returned to his house and have a nap. Captain Cheesy woke up shocked “Oh...that was just a dream” he sighed. Cheesy looked around his place then he spotted the 2 objects and suddenly remembered that he had to work on it. So he got off his bed and quickly ran.

GRUMBLE GRUMBLE “what’s that noise?” Cheesy said curiously GRUMBLE GRUMBLE “there it is again…” he said GRUMBLE “haha I’m such an idiot it’s my stomach whatever…”he said.

He first looked at the chunk of bun. “This looks like a bun from burgers...oh well..I’m going to eat it,” he said. After he ate it “I got it must be Mr Patty I know it’s him..ughh that guy stole my secret formula I’m going to eat him” Cheesy said angrily.

He took a look of the other object “This is a MAP for a treasure oh my gosh…” Chessy said surprisingly. “I have to call…” Cheesy stopped because the phone was ringing so he went over to his phone and answered it.

“Hello? It’s Captain Cheesy” he greeted “Bonjour it’s Dough how's the searching is going?” Dough asks “oh hey..I was about to call you but nevermind” he said “see again late” Dough said “pfft whatever...so I found out who is responsible for this problem it is Mr.Patty” Cheesy said “ok...keep going” Dough replied “the second object is a map” Cheesy said finally getting to the interesting part.

“Ok..ok you should pack some things because we are going to a rough adventure looking for treasure” Dough said “and the thief..the main thing” Cheesy said “we have time for that ok bye remember to be early” Dough said reminding him.

Chapter 4: The Start of the Adventure
Captain Cheesy woke up early in the morning so he won’t be late he packed some gears like a warm furry coat, some food, a pot,flashlights,tents and sleeping bags. “I’m all ready” Cheesy said.
When he got there Detective Dough was still not there “YES I beat him” Cheesy said. He waited and waited for Dough. Dough finally show up “ you're late” Cheesy imitating Dough “whatever..let’s get this over with” Dough said with a red face.

After getting everything ready they looked at the map and see what’s first to go.
“We have to go through the Melted Cheese Ocean to get to Pepperoni Creek” Detective Dough “but we need a boat” Cheesy said.

“oh….I” Cheesy stuttered “I have a friend” Dough interrupted “I was about to say that..it’s like you're reading my mind” Cheesy surprised “no it’s because you’re always late” Dough said. “ I will just call her now” Dough said.


After his conversation with his friend he came back “she said she will be coming right now” Dough said. After minutes waiting for Dough’s friend she finally arrived. She had a motorbike and she was not a pizza she was actually the Garlic Bread “hello my name is Georgie ” she said “I am Captain Cheesy” Cheesy introduce himself.
“Let’s get a move on now….teleport us to your’ re boat” Dough complained “3 2 1” Georgie  counted.

Chapter 5: The Pizza Dragneel
Suddenly, they end up on Georgie‘s boat “How??...” Cheesy asked “don’t even ask” Georgie  said. “So where to?” Dough asked
“ To Peperoni Creek” Cheesy answered. The ride was going well but suddenly…..

The Pizza Dragneel popped up with anger “AHHH!!!” they all screamed “EVERYBODY BUCKLE UP!!” Georgie  warned them. They all ran to their seats and buckled up. The Pizza Dragneel was shooting Pizza out of his mouth.
The water was splashing everywhere that it looked like a tsunami is happening. The Pizza Dragneel started to come down. “phew…..I was about to faint back there” Georgie  said breathing heavily

“Ai” Dough agreed.

“Hey we are almost to shore” Cheesy said with excitement. After they landed  on shore They all hopped out of Georgie’s boat. “May I join on your adventure” Georgie said “Sure” the boys said.

“Looks like we have to go to Pepperoni Creek” Georgie said. After walking for a long time they finally made it to Pepperoni Creek. “Looks like we're here” Cheesy said. The map it says that Pepperoni Creek has a secret cave that has dangerous weapons for some reason.
So they all went and tried to search for the secret tunnel. That's the cave that the map mention. “Guys I think I have found the secret tunnel” Georgie said

“That's great detective Dough and captain cheesy” said.

When they entered the tunnel it was all pitch black, they couldn't see anything. “Do any of you have a flashlight?” Dough asked. “Yes Cheesy answered but I bought two so we might have to share” Cheesy said.

Cheesy took off his bag and try to search for the flashlights he had brought after he found them. He gave one to Dough and Georgie.

Chapter 6: The Dangerous War
“They got deep into the tunnel and finally they found the weapons. “Why do we need these??” Cheesy asked “I think we are battling someone” Georgie  said. Then suddenly the cave just fell apart and the Pepperoni Creek disappeared.

“We are not fighting someone we are fighting something” Dough said backing away from the creatures. The creatures were gigantic and also robotic. “Everybody arm yourself and be prepared to fight them” Georgie warned them.


They all ran to their enemies and they all fought with anger. “They have all been eliminated” Cheesy said “ok now what’s next on that map?” Georgie asked getting really happy.

“Well it says behind us should be a maze” Dough said. They all looked behind them there was a maze “ Rotten Pizza Maze” they all read the sign.

“Well this going to be smelling” Georgie said looking crossed.

“Well if we want this treasure we have to look for it” Dough said “we all have to stick together ok?” Cheesy said. When they all entered the maze they all been separated “oh...mama mia” Dough gasped “what happened?” Georgie echoed “I think have been separated” Cheesy said.

What they didn't know was that they are all in the same maze but in different locations in this really large maze.

“Hey this look like that popular game uh...Escape the Pizza Prison?” Georgie said so she started to take her first steps like babies first steps.

When she started to get used to it she started running dodging all of the booby traps then finally she succeeded “that was pretty easy now I have to wait for the others” Georgie said celebrating herself achieving her first maze.

“AHH!” Cheesy squealed “oh..that was just a jump-scare” Cheesy said in relief “this reminds me the game Escape the Pizza Prison” Cheesy said. Captain Cheesy started run faster and faster when he started to imagine the game in real life.

When he escaped the maze he met Georgie “hey Cheesy that was pretty easy?” Georgie said “not quite if Dough isn't here” Cheesy said. Dough just remembered that he can use his walking stick for teleportation. He suddenly appeared in Cheesy’s and Georgie eyes. “About time you come” Georgie complained “Whatever let’s get going” Dough said.

Chapter 7: The Final Stage
The last thing they had to go to was the Abandoned Pizza Factor
“The Abandoned Pizza Factory?? But that place is haunted” Cheesy wailed. “Don’t be such a wimp” Dough said.

Cheesy did not reply because he was embarrassed. “Ok less talking more time” Georgie complained. Georgie was really impatient so she snatched the map off Dough “Hey I was using that” Dough said angrily

“You talk too much” Georgie said

“Ok boss..” Dough said.

So they all walked to the Abandoned Pizza Factory. When they arrived at the factory “We go straight in” Georgie said. They all enter the factory their bodies were trembling like there’s an earthquake inside of them.

“AHHHHHHH!!” a girl screamed “whoa...it’s the little girl who got killed by the drunk pizza man” Cheesy gasped “but...wh..what...about...the man??” Dough said afraidly “he’s behind you Georgie RUN!!” Cheesy warned both of them.

They were so scared that they went into different directions. Georgie looked behind then she accidentally tripped “HELLP!!” the little girl screamed. Georgie stayed on the ground looking everywhere.

She found a weapon but it was inside a glass “the sword of Pizza Master” Georgie reads the label on the glass.

She breaks the glass it shattered everywhere she grabs the sword. Suddenly, she caught the pizza man and runs after him and stabs him from behind.

Then she went off running then here comes Cheesy and Dough “guys I’ve killed the pizza man” Georgie said breathing heavily “great..now we can’t kill the little girl but we can escape” Cheesy said. “YOU CAN’T ESCAPE BUT YOU CAN RUN!!” the little girl came running from behind them.

They all listened to the girl and ran as fast as possible. “Isn't that’s a vortex?” Dough asked.

“I don’t know but we have to escape from this crazy girl” Georgie said. When they jumped into the vortex they were in a tropical island.

“Hey the treasure” Georgie said. They all ran to the treasure. They opened the treasure box “what is this food?”

Dough asked
“It’s food what else? Let’s eat” Cheesy said
“This is good…” Georgie said with her mouth full of burgers.

“I might have another recipe for the restaurant” Cheesy said.
After feeding their stomachs “stand on the wood and say your location you want to go” they all read the sign. They stepped onto the wood “Pizzaland” they said.
“WE ARE BACK HOME YAY!!” Dough shouted with happiness “AND MY RESTAURANT IS BACK TO NORMAL” Cheesy shouted.”AND I’M STILL HUNGRY” Georgie shouted.

“Well both of you can have a free burger” Cheesy said. They all lived on with their happy lives.



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