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Friday, 19 May 2017

Is Facebook good for children?

Hi, 
In Room 2 for persuasive Writing our topic was 
Is Facebook good for children? This slide presentation is 
persuading you to agree with me. 


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  1. Anonymous29 May 2017 at 11:49

    Kia ora, Amanda.

    Thanks for sharing your persuasive writing. It is great that you have formed an opinion and back up your statements with reasons and some evidence. Don't kids have to be 13 to create a facebook account? I think if you were open to changing your slide, some things you could do to improve it would be:

    In statement 1 you said 'if cyberbullying gets bad to worse then that will make you commit suicide.' I don't think all people that are bullied commit suicide. You could change the sentence to include the word might, or may, this would make it a truer statement.

    Good luck with the persuasive writing. I hope you class is doing debating on these topics.

    Cheers,

    Mr McAulay

    Paroa School - Greymouth

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    1. Anonymous29 May 2017 at 13:51

      Hello Mr McAulay,

      Thank you for the feedback you have given me...I think I have a clue what your talking about. Kids do have to be 13 to create a facebook account. I was wondering if your against kids under 13 years old using Facebook?

      Amanda

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  4. Anonymous18 August 2017 at 14:27

    Hi Amanda,
    I like the way that you have clearly explained why Facebook is not good for children under the age of 13. I also agree with you that Facebook is not good because some children might be tricked by strangers online.
    Why do you think cyberbullying happens on Facebook?

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    1. Anonymous21 November 2017 at 09:32

      Hi Uinisieti,
      I think cyber-bullying happens of Facebook because sometimes there are girls that post a picture of themselves and you know how girls get jealous? Well, I think that might be some of the reasons why people cyberbully on Facebook. I also think people cyberbully on Facebook because they can't challenge people face to face so they decide online is the best place for bullying but it isn't!

      Have you seen cyber bullying online?

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  5. Anonymous18 August 2017 at 14:28

    Hi Amanda, My name is Angelina.M and I really love what you have written about why Facebook is not good for children. I agree with you that children should not have a Facebook account. This really caught my attention. Why do you think Facebook has set the minimum age of 13 for their users?

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  6. Anonymous22 August 2017 at 11:58

    hi Amanda I really like your work you got a lot of facts about face book and how it is not good for kids but I think you should put more pictures that can go with it

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